14 Mart 2009 Cumartesi

Egypt in my dreams…

There are a lot of countries in the world. Each of these countries is a hidden paradise that is waiting to be discovered. Everyone of them has its own wonderful beauties. Some of them are unique in terms of historical qualities, some of them are splendid in terms of architecture and some of them has lots of natural beauties. For example, Paris may be the first choice of many. Because there is Eiffel Tower here, one of wonders of the world. It is also considered to be the center of fashion. Although it is magnificient according to many, Egypt is more attractive and interesting. It is one of the best examples of hidden paradises. Egypt is mostly preferred as one of the centers of tourism because of several reasons. One of them is that it is full of historical ruins, the second one is that there are pyramids there and the third one is that there is the Nile River there.

Egypt is full of historical ruins. It housed one of the strongest and most developped civilizations in the first era. Its name is Egypt Civilization. It was governed by kings. It was also very developped in science, math and astrology. The Egyptian even laid the foundations of Gregorian calendar thanks to their calculations.All of these draw attention of a lot of people about the history of Egypt and also make people have archaeological excavations there.

There are pyramids there. They are one of the seven wonders of the world. The kings had them built as graves for themselves. There are three big pyramids and lots of smaller ones. They are all masterpieces and made up of gigantic stones. They were built in such a way that only in certain times of the day sunlight can go in. Surprisingly, even today it is not known how they were built. They are all worth visiting.

There is the Nile River in Egypt. It is one of the longest rivers in the world and it makes it very important to go and visit it. In addition to this, because of the fact that Egypt is an arid country, the Nile has given life to the Egyptian by helping to water the land. The Egyptian even organised theşr life according to the flow of this river. It can be said that this river is very important in the history of this country and fort he Egyptian

In conclusion, Egyt is one of the countries I prefer to go if I have a chance. Because of the fact that it has full of historical ruins, there are pyramids there and there is the Nile River there, it is very attractive to me.

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  1. Hi Seher,

    Your essay looks organized but have you noticed that the longest paragraph of your essay is the introduction part which should be shorter compared to the other paragraphs. Could you please edit your blog and rewrite the introduction part?

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  2. I agree with Sedat Teacher that your essay seems to be well organized. I can see the thesis statement easily.Also your topic sentences are clear and support your thesis statement.In conclusion you summar your topic succesfully.And I want to say that I think,too,Egypt is wonderful..

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